Tag: Fiction

I enjoy when a book gives a glimpse of events yet to come and then backtracks to recount what happened leading up to the event. It creates a sense of foreboding, and actually makes me read a little bit more carefully to see if I can pick up any hints along the way.

The action is told in alternating points of view between Louise and her daughter Katie, as they navigate their usual summer trip to Montauk. The addition of Katie’s best friend, Isa, throws the whole family a little off-kilter, and it quickly becomes apparent that there is a lot bubbling under the surface. I’ll come back to that in a little bit.

I thought that the plot was well thought-out. I especially liked that we got to the “main event” before the book was even half-way finished, because that meant that there was still a lot to unravel. And boy, was there.

After the incident, the author did a good job of following each of the main characters through their grief process. The result, however, was that there were a few areas that were long inner monologues and self-reflection. The action did drag during these periods, but the exploration of how people grieve differently was well-done.

I also thought that those passages went too long, because by the time we get to the next few “events,” they’re essentially wrapped up within a few pages. I would have liked to have read more detail about those and about James and Katie’s memories of the night in question. All of that could have used more time. It also seemed like a few plot points were more for convenience than for actually mattering to the plot itself.

I actually liked Katie the best; I thought her actions and reactions were very natural to a 17-year-old girl with even a bit of wisdom beyond her years. I didn’t particularly like Louise, especially as I read further. At one point, another character calls her daughter, Katie, “sanctimonious.” I think that fit Louise better (it’s obvious who Katie gets it from) because she came across as selfish and not very responsible.

And that’s one of the things that was hidden below the surface. Her judgment on Sarah was difficult to stomach given her own actions. But, in a way this fit the stereotypical Upper East Side persona that Louise was somewhat scornful of; she just seemed to have very little self-awareness.

One thing that did stand out to me were some of the linguistic choices made by the author. Some are nitpicky (the Upper West Side is not a borough, it’s a neighborhood). However, others should have been caught.

No teenager from Manhattan or Long Island would say that they “fancy” something (especially not a teenage boy), high schools don’t have recess, they would say braids (not plaits) and would have cookies with tea or hot chocolate (biscuits are for breakfast or dinner). Those instances were scattered but jarring enough to me to notice that the lingo wasn’t correct.

The author did capture the overall atmosphere of a Montauk summer, and I liked how she tied it to the hope of making things better between the characters. The plot was nicely charted by the seasons. The story was good, the characters were intriguing (if sometimes unlikable) and there were a few “what the heck” moments. It’s a good book to pick up for the summer.

Author Bio

Jennifer Harvey is a Scottish writer now living in The Netherlands. She is the author of three novels. Someone Else’s Daughter will be published on June 18th 2020 with Bookouture.
Two more titles will follow in October 2020 and May 2021. Her short stories have been published in numerous literary magazines in the US and the UK, such as Bare Fiction, Litro Online, Carve Magazine, Folio, and The Lonely Crowd.

She has been shortlisted for various short story prizes including the Bristol Prize, the University of Sunderland Short Story Award and the Bridport Prize. Her radio dramas have won prizes and commendations from the BBC World Service. She has been longlisted twice for the Bath Novel Award.